After looking at her finale project I thought that by looking at her blog, it would help me to see what is expected for a higher grade. When I first looked a Tammy's blog I could automatically see a high amount of blog posts compared to other ones I have looked at, as well as a lot of detail on them. Tammy's blog has included a different background to show that she has put a lot of time into making it look, and sound as good as it possibly could.
Strengths
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Weaknesses
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Includes a high amount of blog posts, which means she has included detail and written about everything that she has done.
- Another strength is using different medias to present her information, a few ways she has used is prezi (which can allow you to make a presentation of your information) and added a video of what her audience things of her work she has created.
- Each blog post includes at least one picture, so that people reading it can see what she is talking about
- A layout has been added of which is label's to categorize the different sections
- Changed theme, to allow it to look different and makes the whole feel of the blog a lot nicer for the person that is reading it.
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When she does include an image, they have been seen at the bottom. In my opinion maybe it would work better in the middle, to give a break from constant text.
- The finale editing stage posts include a few with just text, which may get a but boring for the audience.
- It may of been nice to add a picture of the people they asked feed back from, so that you can see what age they are and what characteristics they portray.
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Overall I think that Tammy's blog, is at a high standard and something that my blog turns out to be like as I find it to be good. The only reason's for being picky with the weaknesses is because I could not just say everything was perfect, I had to say something needed improving. Looking at this blog I can see has had a lot of time put into, as she may of wanted to do the best she could possibly do.
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